Trouble With Weddings (revamp)

So in this story there is a girl named Tegan and she gets a bit upset about her dad getting married to some other woman.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            
Tegan calls her friend Jenny on the phone and says “ I have some very bad news ”, Dad asked Alex to marry him. You might be wondering who Alex is, she is a close friend. Any way Tegans dad had purposed to Alex, and Tegan didn’t like it. Tegan describes Alex to be, always cheerful and she always cracks dad up with laughter and with that laughter he brings out a smile. Jenny Tegan’s best friend, is interested in, when the wedding is going to take part, Tegan says “sounds like your more interested in the wedding instead of my problems”.

Tegan wanted to see what the wedding ring looked like, so she went into dad’s draw and found the wedding ring just sitting in its case. Tegan tried the ring on and (OH NO) the ring had got stuck on Tegans finger. Tegan panicked and told Jenny. Jenny worked out many strategies to make the ring come off, but sadly none of them worked. The ring came off while Tegan was having a sleep and in the morning the ring was nowhere to be seen.

They finally found the ring, it was in the vacuum cleaner because Mrs Wells the maid/cleaner vaccumed it up. It was time for the couple to get married. They arrived at the church and dad just realized that he had forgotten the ring at home, so he jumped in the car and hurried back home.

I thought this book was really cool and funny and I would like to read another book just like that.

Jessie J - (second attempt)

Do you know who Jesse J is ?

Jessica Ellen Cornish, on the other hand she is also known as Jessie J. She started singing worldwide last year in February . Since then she has recorded and released songs like; Nobody's perfect, Who's Laughing Now, Who you are. Domino , Price Tag and other songs.  

‘Who you are’, is one of the best songs I think she has recorded. Not only is she a good singer, her songs are really inspiring. In the song, ‘Who you are’ I’m pretty confident
that the message throughout the song is,  be faithful to yourself and to others.

I think Jessie J, is a really talented singer.

Jessie J

Do you know who Jesse J is ? well by the time you have finished reading my work I think you would kind of have a clue who Jessie J is.

Her real name is Jessica Ellen Cornish, also known as Jessie J. She started singing worldwide last year in February . Since then she has recorded; Nobody's perfect, Who's Laughing Now, Who you are. Domino , Price Tag and other songs.  

Who you are, is one of the best songs I think she has recorded. Not only is she a good singer, her songs are really inspiring. In her song, Who you are I’m pretty confident that the message is to be faithful to yourself.

If you don’t belive in yourself, nobody will believe in you. Just follow your instincts. - Jessica Ellen Cornish. 


Thanks to Cael for reading my work.

Reading eggs. No.2

Reading eggs, an online program that can help you get better at Spelling, Grammar and Comprehension.

When I was in the process of first using Reading eggs I didn’t have a clue what to do. For me now Reading eggs is really fun and helps you learn, along with that I really enjoy independent reading.

To be honest I didn’t know what comprehension was until I started using reading eggs. In Reading eggs, after your comprehension activties, it gives you a test, you get scored on how well you did in your test.  Have you ever had a favourite online program?.

I love working on Reading eggs.

This piece of writing is a duplicate of my first story about Reading eggs, I have re-edited it and hopefully its a lot better than my first post.

Reading eggs

Reading eggs, is an online program that can help you get better at Spelling, Grammar and Comprehension.

When I first started using reading eggs i didn’t have a clue what to do, but now.... I like reading eggs because it is really fun and helps you learn. Reading eggs has helped me alot with my comprehension, I didn’t know what comprehension was, but I do now.

At the start of the term Mr Barks showed us a new website and it was in fact reading eggs. To be honest I didn’t know what comprehension was until I started using reading eggs.  Have you ever had a favourite online program?, cause I have its reading eggs.

If I could choose between study ladder and Reading eggs, I would probably end up choosing Reading eggs.

Thanks To Cael for reading my work.