tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7508140142315371001.post3803348241534408857..comments2014-09-28T14:51:06.195+13:00Comments on Brooke: My HolidayPES Blogs Administratorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17359536147314284796noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7508140142315371001.post-77483605215130746462011-12-13T14:11:09.104+13:002011-12-13T14:11:09.104+13:00Hi Brooke,
Miss Szymanik here. What a neat story ...Hi Brooke,<br /><br />Miss Szymanik here. What a neat story about your trip to Wellington. It sure is a long drive! I like how you include lots of interesting information and details in your story, like when you talk about all the towns you passed through on the way. I also enjoyed your use of describing words, especially the word silhouette. Make sure you proof read every word in your work, remembering where to put capital letters. This is a very good story! Keep up the good work!Miss Szymaniknoreply@blogger.com